I'd like feedback on my Hub: Daily habits ruining your Skin!

  1. charu7_2000 profile image69
    charu7_2000posted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Daily habits ruining your Skin! (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image94
      theraggededgeposted 2 months ago in reply to this

      Hi there,

      Your English is reasonable, but your writing needs a review for grammatical and phrasing errors. There are many instances of bad punctuation, wrong words and phrases that don't work. For example, "A very debatable topic whether waxing is a better option..." Better option than what? Why not say, "Waxing the face is a debatable topic."?

      Delete every single exclamation point. Really. They make your writing look amateurish. They are not necessary in normal writing  - the only time to use one would be when using a word like 'Help!' in the correct context, of course.

      Your title and sub-headings should be in Title Case.

      Your subject and verb must agree... for example, one of your sub-headings: "is night cremes actually effective!"

      Should be, "Are Night Cremes Actually Effective?"

      Never, ever use text-speak in an article - this "Tie ur locks for a clear skin!" is horrible.

      Grim should be 'grime'. There are many other misused words right through the article.

      Your photos must be legal to use and properly credited: https://hubpageshelp.com/media/Learning … -image-use

      You have a lot of work to do to get this one approved.

      Good luck.

 
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