I'd like feedback on my Hub: Daily habits that ruin your Skin!

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  1. charu7_2000 profile image71
    charu7_2000posted 8 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Daily habits  that ruin your Skin! (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image89
      theraggededgeposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      The same things apply on this article as to your other hubs.

      1. Too many exclamation points! Not necessary and make writing look ugly and unprofessional.

      2. Misuse of punctuation and capital/upper case letters. You use random caps in the middle of sentences but then write i instead of I. There is always a space after a comma, never before.

      3. No attribution of images. You can't use random images off the internet, you have to make sure they are legal to use or you could find yourself with a bill to pay, or worse, litigation. https://hubpageshelp.com/media/Learning … -image-use

      4. You've included a recipe, but your hub isn't really a recipe hub, so get rid of the rating capsule.

      Hope that helps.

      1. charu7_2000 profile image71
        charu7_2000posted 8 years agoin reply to this

        thanx

    2. SakinaNasir53 profile image95
      SakinaNasir53posted 8 years agoin reply to this

      Hi Charu, I have gone through your hub.

      It is good but avoid too many exclamation marks.

      Sleep-No sleep! can be changed to Sleep--No sleep

      Other than that follow what theraggededge has written for you. It has been edited very well by her. ☺

     
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