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I'd like a feedback on a hub: 8 quick tips for increasing productivity

  1. MuhammadAmeen89 profile image78
    MuhammadAmeen89posted 4 months ago

    Hi guys,
    Please have a look at my hub and advise how to make it better
    https://hubpages.com/business/Increasin … ty-at-work

    Do you think this can be submitted to a Hubpages network site?

    1. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 4 months ago in reply to this

      Hi there,

      1. Put your title and sub-headings into title case.
      2. Credit your images and reduce them to two. An article like this doesn't need five photos.
      3. Get rid of the big white gaps between text capsules. Go into them in edit mode, go to the very end of the text and press delete a couple of times.
      4. Find a synonym for 'distraction' it looks over-used.

      There are an awful lot of articles like this on the web. It's a very generic topic, so I couldn't say if HP would select it for a niche site. You never know, though, they might. It's not badly written, but would benefit from a run through on the free app, Hemingway.

      Hope that helps.

      1. MuhammadAmeen89 profile image78
        MuhammadAmeen89posted 4 months ago in reply to this

        Thank you for your valuable feedback. I will definitely address these issues.
        I am following you on hub pages, please do the same smile

        1. theraggededge profile image96
          theraggededgeposted 4 months ago in reply to this

          Oh, I don't do that following thing much... sorry.

    2. Jason mackenzie profile image88
      Jason mackenzieposted 4 months ago in reply to this

      Hi, why is there a huge gap between capsules? That could be bridged and the last three paragraphs could be given a heading like conclusion/Final Word....Thanks, regards...

      1. MuhammadAmeen89 profile image78
        MuhammadAmeen89posted 4 months ago in reply to this

        Thanks for you valuable feedback Jason, I will work it smile

 
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