Please review and comment on the style. Informative weight loss 22.5

  1. kcnck profile image61
    kcnckposted 7 years ago

    Could you please comment on the style of writing.
    Have used a lot of 'I' .Can I improve it in any way. What do you have to say about the tags and heading.
    http://hubpages.com/hub/lost-225-pound- … n-8-months

 
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