Good morning everyone!! I have just published my first blog that is geared toward making some extra money - it is a "how to" blog about Watching Television using your Home Theater System - Any input would be greatly appreciated. Thanks in Advance!!
http://hubpages.com/hub/Ladies-Take-Cha … ter-System
As a woman, I find the title and the entire hub insulting to women.
Sorry, but I find this unacceptably patronising! Your hub implies that you assume most women are idiots.
Yes, I admit I get phased by gadgets and technology. I'm of the generation that grew up without them. However my (male) partner gets even more phased by them than I do. In our household, I am the one who generally fights with and eventually comes to understand a new piece of equipment. Then I tell him what to do to work it.
Forgot to add, I inevitably boycott suppliers who take this sort of attitude towards me just because I am a woman.
THANKS for the Advise and after taking myself out of the AV installer shoes and into the I'm a woman too shoes I AGREE - thank you for pointing this out to me and I will change the title immediately!!!
Maybe I'm the wrong woman to ask, because I usually go behind my husband and rewire all these things, but I found it insulting too. Perhaps the women you deal with are just not too bright. But anyway....
You have no key words in the first part of your hub. It sort of meanders along. You need to get the keywords in there or it will never be found.
Your title will probably never be searched. I'm a woman and I would not go to google and search ladies and home theatre system together. I might google home theatre operation or something like that. And I know no women who call themselves ladies. This could be a cultural thing, but I have never heard it used except among preschoolers because we say to them "Go ask that lady"
You need to go to google keyword tool, type in home theatre system, and see what people are actually searching for. Then write a hub using those keywords.
You have universal remotes for sale on your page. Why not just gear the whole thing to universal remotes? Go on about the the benefits of owning a universal remote and maybe say something about the features of the ones on your page. If you find some cool colorful remotes then you could have a universal remotes for women page. I know I'm tired of all our black remotes that look the same and blend in with the furniture so I can't find them.
Just a few thoughts for you. Good luck.
help me ive got loads of ideas swimming in my head but cant write ...i have been a stay at home mum for 15 years and feel like my brain has gone to sleep ..lol.im starting a open university course in oct and im scared i wont beable to do it ...i used to have a brain honest lol
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