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    joaniembposted 6 years ago
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    Website Examinerposted 6 years ago

    Not bad at all. It could do with an extra round of proofreading, including the following:
    - Punctuation - commas and periods missing here and there;
    - Paragraphs - noticed one triple space between paragraphs
    - "quite" - change to quiet.

    Good luck with everything.