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My latest hubs-what do you think ?

  1. pink flavour profile image60
    pink flavourposted 6 years ago
  2. Cagsil profile image61
    Cagsilposted 6 years ago

    Welcome to HubPages! smile

    I've reviewed your two hubs and concluded both need-

    (a) More content.(expand on what you've written)
    (b) More text capsules.(use more to expand content)
    (c) More pictures.
    (d) You could add a news feed or poll or RSS feed.(refreshing content is a google plus)
    (e) You could add Amazon capsules for books on the topic.

    **Content should be no less than 400+ words. The longer the hub, like 1000+ words gets better results(keyword rich content helps too).

    Hope that helps. smile

    1. Druid Dude profile image60
      Druid Dudeposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Great advice Cag. He's experienced and knowledgable. Welcome to the hub!

    2. pink flavour profile image60
      pink flavourposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Thank you for your comment, I will keep in mind what you said on my next hubs and maybe improve my old ones too .

      1. Cagsil profile image61
        Cagsilposted 6 years ago in reply to this

        You're welcome. smile

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    Website Examinerposted 6 years ago

    The hub concerning the brain fuctions contains grammatical, punctuation, and spelling errors, and is badly in need of proofreading. For example, all from the first few paragraphs:

    - Delete all spaces preceeding punctuation marks ("?" / "!" / ":" / "," / ".")

    - Punctuation, use commas for pauses, e.g. "...with your general knowledge, you have to..."

    - "...no certainly studies..." --> "...no definitive studies..."

    - Spelling: "...menthal sleep..." --> "...mental sleep..."

    - Grammar: ''...say that they 'natural' origins..." -->"say that their 'natural' origins..."

    1. pink flavour profile image60
      pink flavourposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Thank you for taking a look at it. I will try to be more careful in the future and take all your advices.

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        Website Examinerposted 6 years ago in reply to this

        You are welcome. I wish I could have done all of it, but that would be difficult here. It is a lot of work, but well worth it. That article has the potential to become a winner.

 
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