Something About Nothing

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   SARAHQUILL78posted 13 years ago

   You never were about anything
   
   an ill fated fantasy
   
   some ideal soaked in naivety
   
   concocted by my mind
   
   in love so blind
   
   you took it all
   
   and still asking for more
   
   but I'm the whore?
   
   eyes wide shut?
   
   not me. no more.
   
   gathering my wits and senses
   
   seeing you without the rose colored lenses
   
   all knowing with my well being
   
   you never were about anything.

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      VanHidposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      interesting also deep! I enjoyed reading this, that i did

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      ceciliabeltranposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      nice

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      leebertteaposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      Yes, be careful what you wish for, you might get it! So the saying goes and fantasy is always better before it becomes polluted with reality. We are only hurt by those that we love and so that is the risk we take when we attempt to make those fantasies reality, yet if we never took the chance we never would have known love, you simply can not have pleasure without pain, so relish your hurt, embrace it, feel it in the depths of your soul and when you're ready you'll love even harder the next time knowing that the pain could never be worse than what you've felt already. Good luck!

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   Gracie Sophiaposted 13 years ago

   Sounds like words from experience of a broken heart. The emotion hits you in the face----and that is a positive thing because the readers can feel your pain.

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   Richieb799posted 13 years ago

   nice Poem, I may have a go at a poem hub later on, I haven't done one yet

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