I've found my new love!! Hubbing!!

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   Zotanposted 13 years ago

   I never even dreamed of writing, and enjoying it... i think this is a great way to express things, and have your little say on things.. I really enjoy seeing what other people's little life stories are too, from all over the world!  amazing, this is definately my cup of tea. and all i'm asking of you guys is exactly what this forums for.... constructive critiscm.. any tips? am i going wrong any where? as i'd love to improve on my writing so to make you readers have a better read!! lol thank you

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      John Holdenposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      Hi Zotan and welcome, it's fun.
      As you ask for criticism, can I suggest a little more content, like about twice as much. Leave them wanting more is good, wanting lots more, not so good.
      Can I also suggest more care with spelling and like me some days can't remember how to spell your own name then either write first in a word processor or use google chrome which checks your spelling in most on line forms including Hub pages. Mind you, it will tell you you've mis-spelt google!
      
      Are you in Durham UK?

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         Zotanposted 13 years agoin reply to this

         thank you very much John.. yes I am in Durham U.K.  and i find it hard to write more... I think I like short and sweet. But i will really try..

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   ediggityposted 13 years ago

   Don't mess with the Zotan!

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      Zotanposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      lol   thats how i got the name.. love adam sandeler's films too!

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   chan0512posted 13 years ago

   Not sure who Zotan is. Just keep writing, you will improve over time.

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      ediggityposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      Zotan is right above your original comment.  Don't mess with her.

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      Zotanposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      thank you... If you're reffering to the adam sandler film, it's called 'don't mess with the Zohan' watch it... it's good lol

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   saleheensblogposted 13 years ago

   Well,I read your hubs. Use proper capitalization in your hubs and title, write bigger contents and do some keyword research if you want to earn from here.
   
   Welcome to HP. Enjoy hubbing.

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      Zotanposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      thank you. I am addicted to hubbing..lol

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   WryLiltposted 13 years ago

   Zotan, it's great that you're enjoying hubpages.
   
   However hubpages is NOT a blogging site, which is what your hubs resemble.
   
   They're also very close to being removed as substandard for personal content.
   
   It might be an idea to read up in the learning centre.

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