Hi, need contsructive feedback please :)

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   redemption86posted 14 years ago

   Hi all
   
   I'm a new hubber and have published two hubs. I was hauled and shoved onto the site by frogdropping and now find myself abandoned
   
   Could I please have some hubbing experts read one or both of my hubs and give me some advice? Obviously I cannot rely on the frog
   
   And thankyou in advance!

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   frogdroppingposted 14 years ago

   Oi oi - do not cast aspersions on my whiter than white character. Or greener than green
   
   I will have a look but don't expect a forum reply. I can tell you in person

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   Pearldiverposted 14 years ago

   Are you Sure?
   Did Frogdropping Explain to you that you must donate to our Christmas Party Fund if you place your work in the Extreme Rackover Forum for perusal?

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   Helen Caterposted 14 years ago

   Second paragraph from Horse vices:
   weave is whole forehand(it's)
   
   help reduse the(reduce)
   
   Some yards dont (don't)
   
   will encorage(last paragraph)
   
   Good hub, I love horses, just spell check a little. I am sure frogdropping will help, if you beg!!

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   archdawposted 14 years ago

   Will check.  BRB

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   archdawposted 14 years ago

   I am baaaaack!!!  Good news I read both your hubs and left you comments on both.  I did not know that a horse could have so many vices and I am sure you probably could come up with more than just the three that you gave us.  Any way I am not into horses, but your hub held my attention in that you gave me information that to me was facinating.  Keep up the good writing! Don't be so hard on THE GREEN ONE!!!

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   frogdroppingposted 14 years ago

   No doubt the horsey one will return with further ludicrous allegations about amphibians. Just say neigh eh?
   
   And no, I have yet to inform him of the Christmas fund PD. That is definite need to know information.
   
   As for his hubs - I told him about the site and for reasons known only to his good self, he joined, wrote and published two hubs at the crack of dawn.
   
   I have just guided him through the process regarding another. Though it's his own words, I gave it a little SEO shine and in fairness, he did listen and learn
   
   And he had to beg. Just a little ...

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      fishtiger58posted 14 years agoin reply to this

      LOL

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   redemption86posted 14 years ago

   Thanks all for your comments. As miss Frog stated i wrote the first 2 with wild abandon! i have just completed my 3rd, about a condition call laminitis which im very proud of!

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   The_Bossposted 14 years ago

   Redemption, you have very informative hubs and I learned a bit while reading them. Your layout is great and you have officially been accepted into the community. Keep up the good work!

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    Dame Scribeposted 14 years ago

    That will cost one fan per review lol

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    bukanposted 14 years ago

    Just type "best hub" on your hub page search button right hand top of middle. You will find all best hubber's around their, personally i got help from "Chuck" as a beginner.

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