In a Blur...
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there are so many things
that I wanna do
sometimes I’m a fool
sometimes just so sure
the unexpected
the unpredictable
just don’t go away…
and I’m in a blur
baby, listen to me
there are so many things
that I wanna do
never thought I’d wake up
missin’ missin' you
never thought I’d stare out
wishin’ wishin’ you
so meet me outside
tonight gotta tell you
bits can no longer hide
no more can I deny this
and I’m in a blur
baby, listen to me
there’s nothin' much clear
than you and me
never thought I’d feel this
wantin' wantin' you
never thought I’d write this
thinkin' about you
there are so many things
that I wanna do
I’d like to do ‘em with you
so baby come to me
let’s kiss and gone in a blur
nothin’ else I wanna do
nothin’ else I wanna say
I’m in a blur
and nothing is much clear
now
it’s just me and you
listen to me when I say
I wanna be with you...
***about 3am, 31102009
on the road…going home
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Comments
thank you creativeone ;p
it's nice to see you here again
beautiful... absolutely beautiful... :)
it means a lot...thanks Ash... :)
Your poem is awesome!!! :)
thanks lance ;p
You are a very good writer. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem. God Bless you:)
thank you Keira! you have a good heart..God bless ;p
What a captivating image-to be in a blur.
Is everything vague and indistinct. Unfocused?
Except fot that one part-that needle sharp burning.
I love the simplicity of this work and it's emotional
power. I can feel the desire in it.
yeah vague but so clear at the same time...
didn't use some deep words as I don't want anythin in a blur anymore LOL
thanks Dark Heart! ;p
Oh blaise, your a romantic very nice hub :)
thank you wolfpack! :)
Not too fast though, take the time to enjoy. LOL One day you will be old and hopefully able to relive it all in your heart and mind. Romance/love is such a wonderful, destructive, life changing, challenging, and life building thing. Nice poem. CC
LOLOL thanks for the good insights Ralwus. I always concur in them :) Life is crazy beautiful, enjoy!
creativeone59 says:
4 weeks ago
Thanks for a very nice, cute and sweet hub. thanks for sharing. creativeone59