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4 p.m.

Updated on January 31, 2010


4 p.m. was my favorite time

you used to wait for her

I used to wait for mine

time was flyin’

who would have thought

that’s the right place

and the right time

who would have thought

I’d cling to you

in one corner of wrong avenue



And so the clock hit to four

you were smilin’ at me more and more

in your stare I’ve seen what you’ve been dreamin’

and your voice told me I should believe it…



‘t was 4 o’clock in the aftie

when time runs so slow

still my boyfriend won’t show up

and no sign of your girl though

who would have thought

we’d share that moment

odd excitement

who would have thought

I’d cling to you

in one corner of wrong avenue



And so the clock hit to four

you were talkin’ to me more and more

in your angst I’ve felt what you’ve been missin’

and your sad face told me I should change it…



We met again at 4 p.m.

but just like any other time

4 p.m. couldn’t be forever

Everythin’ ended out of line



***a long time ago

written 04052008

© 2009-Nov. b l a i s e



See my other poems...


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You

Whoever You are

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    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      6 years ago from close to you...

      I always love hearing your comments. It makes me see what is inside your heart.. You are very amazing and deep. I admire guys like that. They are always so interesting. You are a gem.

      *hugs you lots* Thank you, Max!

    • BeyondMax profile image

      BeyondMax 

      6 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      That Wrong Avenue... What a beautiful, captivating poem, Fehl! I fell in love with it. It touches heart and soul, tells the story of possibilities, of dreams and wishful thinking...questions, forever left unanswered. I think it's a very deep poem. Doesn't matter that it's written log time ago, it's timeless. (See, I got emotional all over it =))

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      7 years ago from close to you...

      Thank you writinginalaska :) what a pretty place

    • writinginalaska profile image

      writinginalaska 

      7 years ago from southeast Alaska

      i like the line... in one corner of wrong avenue. very clever. lvh

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      8 years ago from close to you...

      hahah Thanks for dropping by horseback :)

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      ahorseback 

      8 years ago

      And I thought I was the only one who thought this way, or had imaginary loves. Great read....

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      8 years ago from close to you...

      really Dark Heart? LOL

      Wrong Avenue is a place I dare not to go back hehe

      thanks friend! :)

    • Dark Heart profile image

      Dark Heart 

      8 years ago

      Really nice Blaise.I think I've been

      on Wrong Avenue before.

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      8 years ago from close to you...

      thanks for passing by Micky Dee :)

    • Micky Dee profile image

      Micky Dee 

      8 years ago

      Nice! I could sense being there.

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      8 years ago from close to you...

      thanks for the comment MFB III

      very poetic ;p

      that's lovely, liked it!

    • MFB III profile image

      MFB III 

      8 years ago from United States

      Two disillusioned souls

      left waiting for the

      missing two who caused

      their dissappointment,

      suddenly find each other

      across the emptiness

      that surrounds them,

      thus happenstance

      becomes romance.....

      truly a lovely tale,

      told daily and nightly

      all across the world.

      ~~~~MFB III

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      8 years ago from close to you...

      glad you loved it Ken :)

      twas a poem I made last year, but made it a lyrical poem instead. I'm glad it opens a door for you.. thanks!

    • kendalcushman87 profile image

      kendalcushman87 

      8 years ago from London ON

      Wow, I love this Blaise. Opens the doors for imaginative imagery. :)

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      8 years ago from close to you...

      thanks Enigmatic ;p

      yeah every tick of time is a possibility..

    • Enigmatic Me profile image

      8 years ago from East Coast Canada

      Life eh... timing is a good and bad thing.... brings us to where we need to be, shows us the possibilities.... temptation abound...

      Nicely written

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      8 years ago from close to you...

      thanks a lot Keira for the usual visit :)

      you're a great writer. God bless always :)

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      Keira 7 

      8 years ago

      Beautiful.:) Always happy to read your work. God Bless.

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      8 years ago from close to you...

      haha yeah my fave too ;p

      though that was so wrong

      thanks Randy!

    • Randy Behavior profile image

      Randy Behavior 

      8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Nice. First stanza was my favorite. :)

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