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Whoever You Are

Updated on January 31, 2010
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Whoever you are

Please bump into me now

Or tomorrow or next week

Coz I’m tired of waiting

Falling and breaking

Whoever you are

Can you please hurry

Don’t know anymore

If I could endure this

Every night just gets colder

Whoever you are

Please say your name

Unravel yourself now

Coz I’m tired of writing

The wrong ones, erasing

Whoever you are

Please don’t scare me

Was weak to fear

Vulnerable always been

When I push away please stay

Whoever you are

Please don’t believe me

When I say you kill me

I breathe the air

You breathe

Whoever you are

Please don't listen

When you hear my heartbeat

It isn't enough

Every part of me wants your every part

Whoever you are

Please don’t be too kind

Don’t love me much either

If I find you do

Whoever you are

A bad girl like me…

Wouldn't deserve

a good guy like you...

© 2010-Jan.  b l a i s e

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    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      5 years ago from close to you...

      Everyone deserves only the best but not everyone found the only thing or person they deserve. Thank you for reading. I always love your comments :)

    • Anna Haven profile image

      Anna Haven 

      5 years ago from Scotland

      Heartfelt and genuine. Written with honesty and without fear. I hope you have found what you are looking for and know you deserve only the best :)

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      6 years ago from close to you...

      Aw Max thank you so much. Yes I always smack it right on the forehead LOL My readers make my poetry stand out too :) Just like you. What are we gonna do now if our hubs Zzzz.... hehe You are awesome! You deserve more than the best :) xx

    • BeyondMax profile image


      6 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Awe, Fehl, how I adore your straight forward approach! That what makes your poetry stand out and makes a difference to everyday life. You don't go beating around the bush, you just smack it right on the forehead =) Though it shows all of the pent up emotions and insecurities stuffs, but Fehl, you are awesome, you deserve the best of the best of the best! =)

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      8 years ago from close to you...

      That's a great compliment, thanks Alya rose :)

    • Alya rose profile image

      Alya rose 

      8 years ago from From beyond the reeds

      You are very talented when putting down how you feel,but your under this illusion that your not worth much,everyone is worth more than they realize,i do hope you'll realize.

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      8 years ago from close to you...

      Hi Cath! You always flatter me girl :) Thanks so much! XO

    • Astra Nomik profile image

      Cathy Nerujen 

      8 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Quite sublime. You write in a way that moves and transforms. I envy your talent, blaise25.

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      8 years ago from close to you...

      hell yea sometimes LOL thanks Mentalist acer!

    • Mentalist acer profile image

      Mentalist acer 

      8 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      There's nothing a nice guy responds more to than a bad girl...

    • Moulik Mistry profile image

      Moulik Mistry 

      8 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

      So deeply felt - I can relate to it...

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      8 years ago from close to you...


      thank you for always visiting.. :)


      thanks for the shining comment :)

    • Cheeky Girl profile image

      Cassandra Mantis 

      8 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      You sparkle in these lines...

    • Karen Russell profile image

      Karen Russell 

      8 years ago


    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      8 years ago from close to you...

      ^_^ what can I say I love putting twists :p

      Thanks DH!

    • Dark Heart profile image

      Dark Heart 

      8 years ago

      Completely blew me away.What an ending.

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      8 years ago from close to you...


      Thanks a bunch for always stopping by and commenting :)


      Ah, just a lonely and empty moment made me scribble those words…Everyone deserves it :) The bad girl line? LOL hope it wouldn’t define ‘mean’ as it may sound. Hehe As I’ve said, I felt lonely and empty while writing it, that I ended up excruciating myself…

      Thanks, Invictus! Your words speak a lot of lessons :)


      Thank you for the lovely comment and hope :) I’m not looking for something, I’m just missing something…

    • Cheeky Girl profile image

      Cassandra Mantis 

      8 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      I liked this Hub. You are a good writer, and your feelings are there. I hope you find what you are looking for. You deserve it.

    • I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image


      8 years ago

      Nice poem. Sounds as though it was straight from the heart. Though, I hope when 'whoever you are' arrives they are met by someone whom knows they deserve the greatest love, regard, and magical feeling. You deserve it, I deserve it... we all deserve it..But, I don't it arrives until we, know within ouselves that we deserve it..I'm ready.. :)

      ps. ~ The bad girl line may actually attract 'whoever ever' .... 'who knows'? LOL

    • carolina muscle profile image

      carolina muscle 

      8 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

      Wow... nice work.. a very strong poem!

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      8 years ago from close to you...

      thanks Cupid51! :)

    • cupid51 profile image


      8 years ago from INDIA

      A very good poem. Thanks for it and also for following me.

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      8 years ago from close to you...


      Thanks a lot, I admire your insights as always :)


      cool, reading-between-working ;) Thank you, see you around!

    • Ghost Whisper 77 profile image

      The IGNITER vs Corrupted Governments 

      8 years ago from The U.S. Government protects Nazi War Criminals

      Excellent poem! I am making my rounds on reading-between working-so glad that I did! I will be back....:)

    • heart4theword profile image


      8 years ago from hub

      Great poem! I remember being at that same place, at times in my life. Just wish when a person is there, it wouldn't hurt so much:( Great Hub! So good to put your feelings down on paper:) Don't give up, keep looking up! The right one will come along:)

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      8 years ago from close to you...


      hey, Mik! Thank you. Everyone deserves it but not every time.. Hope it's halfway.. :)


      glad to see you :) someone who'd be crazy in love with whoever I am. Hey, 'whoever you are' who are you? lol

      @Petra Vlah

      thanks for the praise! :) nice to see you

    • Petra Vlah profile image

      Petra Vlah 

      8 years ago from Los Angeles

      This is a great poem and "wherever you are" (HP included)you deserve much praise for writing it. Thank you

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      8 years ago

      who is whoever you are?

    • Micky Dee profile image

      Micky Dee 

      8 years ago

      Oh Blaise, you rock us with your love and then "not too much". You are deserving of an intense love. Where is it? Thanks

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      8 years ago from close to you...


      glad to see you here again. Thanks for liking it! :)


      what do you feel exactly? did you write a hub bout it? gotta read yours tonight.. THANKS for reading and commenting! :)


      Hi, Dim! Your comments make me smile as always, thank you! :) I don't realize my worth sometimes unfortunately.. :c God bless..

    • Dim Flaxenwick profile image

      Dim Flaxenwick 

      8 years ago from Great Britain

      O blaise that was gorgeous. I'm sure you are worth more than you think you are.. Not everyone can use words to such beauty, the way you do, bless you

    • Run Down Battery profile image

      Run Down Battery 

      8 years ago from UK

      such torture coming through... you've just summed up exactly how I feel...

    • advisor4qb profile image


      8 years ago from On New Footing

      Love it!


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