Doctors Advice

DOCTORS ADVICE

She went to the doctor

Who then went and shocked her

And in the end he talked her

Into losing some weight.

 

With this news she went so quiet

She'll need to go on a diet

Have food without the need to fry it

All the stuff she would hate.

 

Since she had trouble with her walking

Even her breathing when just talking

Her whole health, in fact,was shocking.

Maybe that was her fate.

 

But after listening to his advice

All her food could still be nice

She didn't need to be told twice

It could all work out great.

 

 

 

 

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Nell Rose 5 years ago from England

Hi, a very appropriate poem! lol I am trying to lose half a stone, and tried jogging today! ha ha ha never again! great poem!


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Rosie2010 5 years ago from Toronto, Canada

Hiya Michael, what a great way to point out that losing can save some lives. Good job!

Have a nice day,

Rosie


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michael ely 5 years ago from Scotland Author

Hi Nell, Thanks a lot for your comments. All the best with your weight loss!!

Michael.


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michael ely 5 years ago from Scotland Author

Hi Rosie, Thanks a lot for reading and commenting on this.

Michael.


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CMCastro 5 years ago from Baltimore,MD USA

This is adorable! I enjoy this as it is my first hub to read by you. Thanks for the opportunity.


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michael ely 5 years ago from Scotland Author

Hi CMCastro, Thanks a lot for the comment, and for following me. Much appreciated.

Michael.

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