Poem "Love"

Immediately after

Some one says to you

I love you

Stand prepared

Once the love is sincere,

You have just been placed

In a position for this

once in a lifetime job

To answer

Say whether you care

Exercising authority

In which you must quickly

Assume control

Show responsibility

For those truthful feelings,

For that trust

For being in charge

Of the situation

Where someone risks

Their Love!

True Love is one

That eludes so many of us.

Believe me

It’s a beautiful thing

That will be happening

Have you ever dream

Of hearing an angel

Sing?

For best results

It must be fed same

Sincerity

That it feeds to others

That is exactly what

Has just happened

To you

You will know

That it’s truthful

Once it’s true love.

I can only hope

That wisdom pays you

A visited this day

Assigned only

To show you

Exactly

What you need

To do and say.

If you were

My biological

Sons or daughters

Of course

It will be free

I will volunteer

To teach you

What a pleasure it

Will be for me

To insures

That my children

Sees

The beauty that’s

True love

But you are not

My children

So I’ll make this

Attempt

By asking God

To

Guide, and reach you.

Love is always a

Sacrifice,

A truth most parents,

Would usually show.

So if someone truly

Loves you

They have already

Decided

That loving you

Is already the way

To go.

To stand steadfast

Prepared to sacrifice

Get on their hands

And knees

Putting on a love

Show.

As far as love leads

It’s called sacrifices,

It’s a truth that’s

Easily recognized

The blind feels it!

The deaf hears it

The love part

Explained.

It’s a beautiful thing

For which one would

Willingly live or die!

Don’t ask me why

Won’t be a difficult

Choice

Sweeter than Romeo

Would feel

Had he heard Juliet

Voice

When someone says

I love you!

Your sacrifices

Will ill be quite wondering?

What’s best to do?

Raise your head

Up high

In seconds you’ll know

What that love means

Without tears you cry.

Don’t get carried away

With only words

If you are only trying

To interpret something,

Listen to the birds

When they sing.

It should not be

Difficult to know

What’s true?

It becomes

That much easier

When it’s being said

To you

There is nothing

That true love

Cannot reach

Even your first time

In love class

Will be quite easy

Learning what Love teach

Most of us

Have felt it before

First from the

Most high God

Then from our mothers

And fathers.

I am sure I know

Because

It’s same for me

My mother the proof

She’s still here,

I feel her love and care see.

But you are not

The first,

And you won’t be

The last.

So many believes

That their time for love

Has long past

I say to you

My brother, my sister

That’s miles from the

“Truth”

Simply be sure when

Its love you are seeking

When it comes around

Be sure you recognize

It’s neither old nor a youth

First recognize the one

Who have always sincerely?

Love you

It is the Highest God.

You see

Every true love requires

Sacrifice

And it’s sacrifice

Not too many are willing

To make

All rights reserved

Blessings.

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Sky9106 2 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

You have always ..made great energies flow I remain humbled. Bless.


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carolinemd21 2 years ago from Close to Heaven

Beautiful writing Sky. There is a lot of power in your words. :)


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Sky9106 2 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Its my life's work, while you are probably on number 10 at this time , hope you are having the greatest success. Am confident that it will be fine when its out , ready to go but there are some legal matters I am clearing up so no one touches any revenues.


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Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

just wanted to know if you are preparing your wring again :)


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

When the true purpose for which something was created, is revealed by those experiencing and the message which comes back are those bearing the only true rewards . Those are the fulfillment of the purpose for with it was done. Thank you for such a sincere comment Phoebe, I am quite happy , thankful and I share your sincere feelings.

Blessing and give thanks.


Phoebe Pike 4 years ago

Beautifully written... it is unique and it deeply touched me.


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Love in itself is the kindness , because I got the x also ,but Love had nothing to do with it! Understanding love , is so much more that obeying part of the feeling, Love don't die or break up. Love cannot finish.

I hear some folks saying don't give up on love, you better let then know, never fight a battler you can't win.

Like bring a sword to a gun fight. Understanding is the greatest part of love.

Bless bro.


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WD Curry 111 4 years ago from Space Coast

Love has not been kind to me. Neither have my ex-wives.


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Thank you Silent , always always good to know that a young person could become involved in things that are life giving and strengthening to others.

Put God first and welcome aboard.

Thank you and Bless.


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Silent hurricane 4 years ago from Israel

I loved it. So floating and wonderful... Thank you.


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

I am the one that is so glad to to be following you . After seeing those beautiful picks this day, it makes for a life of truthful honor to the Most High God and celebration, to follow his way.

The pleasure is mine.

Thanks for all you sincere kindness.

Bless.


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Sky..this simply awesome and beautiful...I am so glad I am following you....God bless you.I voted up and awesome and beautiful..debbie


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Bless, Always remember that which we made first with reason , cannot take any other position until completed , or else you will have to re convince the mind which is sometimes extremely difficult.

Walk good we await.

Bless.


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon

Sky, just finishing up finals this week, then I'll be back to my normal chatty self!


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Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Thank you so much Jesusmyjoy. I will be by shortly

blessing.

Thanks .


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jesusmyjoy 5 years ago from Bucyrus Ohio

nice


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Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Thanks PDX, good to see you , like I said I know something grand is coming , you have been a little quiet, but god is good.

Hope my invitation is still open. Thanks for reading.

Bless.


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PDXKaraokeGuy 5 years ago from Portland, Oregon

you're welcome, Sky!


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Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Trying to let you know, that the very first poem that I met on this site was : "Have you ever lost a friend."

You little different to me, I am a little different to you So I am going to look for the big billboards:

IN SEARCH OF.

"ALWAYS EXPLORING"

Blessings.


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

I went to see my Sister Mary today, just got on the computer. Nice to be missed..Thank you for kind friendship..Cheers


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Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Blessings "AE" and thanks for another beautiful comment, missed you today, did not see you around .

Stopped by your hubs and started reading the little boy whose parents got arrested,and something came up on my side. But I got a good way , be back.

True love is a wonderful thing whe you know what it is.

Give Thanks.


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful Sky, Love is a precious feeling that comes and stays or slips away. The love we feel for a child only grows stronger each day. It's important to know the difference between love and lust, lust wanes. Thank you for another beautiful hub..Cheers


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Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

A humble fellow cannot wake to anything better than the beautiful comments of Mr.C Curry. It is my sincere and humble pleasure to be the recipient of such honor .

Sincere thanks toy you Chip give thanks . I know the band should be able to strike a cord with you.

Blessings and Thanks always.


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WD Curry 111 5 years ago from Space Coast

You are collecting quite a following for your excellence. The short lines were a stroke of genius for this medium. The reader can't help popping the clicker to read and it assumes a rhythm of it's own. The young men in this house are accomplished musicians. They play multiple instruments and are on a Foreigner "kick" right now.

Every piece you write is another ascent. You will soon have to change your name to "ThirdHeaven9106".


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Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Thanks PDXguy for reading and for the kind comment.

Blessings and Give Thanks .


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PDXKaraokeGuy 5 years ago from Portland, Oregon

well put, Sky. Good work!


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Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Thanks nenyt. for reading , for your great comment, and for your question.

One can only try to answer on a topic such as Love, as it is first a personal and very private thing.

I will not consult any ulterior source for an answer, as that will defeat the purpose of what I personally believe Love to be .

Love is a feeling that lives with everyone, you are born with it it's hereditary and instinctual. I will even go as far as to say everything living has exercises some form of love . Love is possibly the most intelligent entity we as humans might ever know , and possibly also can be the most foolish, so it must be guarded and protected. It sits very close to your truths in both strengths and weaknesses .

it's definitely an individual thing, it's transcends every possible barrier and to put the icing on the cake "It is what it it" , to everyone.

No one could ever be able to tell another , that what the feel is, or is not love .

Love will agree as well as it may disagree, hopefully each and every individual will love carefully and accordingly . True love understands.

My very best description that I will start kids off with learning , is that the Most High God is Love.

Blessings to you nenyt. Keep up the great work with the kids, you will be blessed.


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Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Thanks so mush for reading and enjoying , it's a pleasure on share, while feeling what others too have to share, Glcoach I will be stopping by your hubs sometime soon.

Thanks for such a beautiful comment .

Peace and light to you . Bless.

Lets all Give Thanks and Blessings


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nenytridiana 5 years ago from Probolinggo - Jawa Timur - Indonesia

I like this hub. Love is always a hot thing to write, and you just wrote one of its perspective. The power of love as "The blind feels it! The deaf hears it" is unquestionable. I like those pictures and video as well. "I want to know what love is" no one has answered this question perfectly! Millions of poems and articles about love, but the definition of love can not be determined, or at least not yet satisfactory. Thank You Sky9106!


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qlcoach 5 years ago from Cave Junction, Oregon

Yes to the power of Love that shines in many forms. Love given and accepted between soul mates is a precious commitment to compromise, to help each other, and to do no intentional harm. Enjoyed your poem. Peace and Light...Gary.


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Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Thanks Frank , but it's me that' honored to almost got my early autograph.

But your spirit is good and I am happy to be familiar with you area, easy to find the area.lol

Thanks for flattering compliment , it gives me great reasons to dig deeper and I most definitely will.

Thanks for reading .

I am hopping over to your side to have my fill , so until we write again, Blessings .


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Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

you know your words reach.. and touch thats power.. up and awesome.. Trumbull Connecticut.. that's in my backyard wow great to almost live near a talented writer :)


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Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Thanks for reading and such great comment Hattiemattiemae. Such an unusual name, but pretty thank You.

Thank you so much for commenting , and thoughtful beautiful comment indeed .

Yes it's overwhelmingly true that the sacrifice almost always gets thrown somewhere to the back . The same prerequisite (sacrifice)that gets most to that point, to begin with, is seemingly, all but forgotten . But rest assured, that it always takes two to tango, and that's where the truth of that love comes in.

Love never lets love fall, and love reminds lovers of their truths and promises.

Thanks for the follow , soon be by to visit.

I can sense a truthful understanding for this subject, so until we write again.Great thoughts.

Blessings and sincere thanks for the intelligent comment....PS ..permission to abbreviate your name?


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HattieMattieMae 5 years ago from Limburg, Netherlands

Think Love is a sacrifice, but at the same time we should always remember who made the choice to sacrifice, and when we feel someone owes us for what we gave, we forget to realise that love is more about giving than recieving. :)

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