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Any suggestions for improvement?

  1. Jbern117 profile image69
    Jbern117posted 5 years ago

    I would love any help at all; on writing style, setup of my hubs, anything at all - I signed up a while ago for Hubpages but have just begun a few weeks ago seriously trying to write for Hubpages.

    My profile's here: http://jbern117.hubpages.com/ and Here are my two most recent hubs:

    http://jbern117.hubpages.com/hub/How-th … heir-names



    the second of which got absolutely no attention - probably not a huge keyword I suppose?

    Anyway, I greatly appreciate any constructive criticism at all!

    1. agilitymach profile image96
      agilitymachposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      I read your hub on the planets' names, and I thought it was fantastic!!  Good work!!!

      1. Jbern117 profile image69
        Jbern117posted 5 years agoin reply to this

        Thanks big_smile!!

  2. CloudExplorer profile image78
    CloudExplorerposted 5 years ago

    I checked out your profile, and I noticed by seeing the accolades there, it shows that you have very little if any hubtivity here on hubpages, please don't take this the wrong way, but in order to get more viewers to all of your hubs it does take a great deal of community participation, sharing here and on many social networking locations today all to jump start the networking factors for sure.

    So, you might wanna think about that to help in getting much more feedback, and potential to get your hub per say the one you linked us to here, a better chance at taking lift off, because we all get our jump start from the community of members here, and it is a way to leverage a bit more on hubbing in general. Good Luck!