Is this too much for the faint hearted?

  1. JakeFrost profile image60
    JakeFrostposted 5 years ago

    Hi there,

    I am writing a semi biography/ true story for a close friend of mine. She has had a lot of trouble in her life and wanted to get it written. I have had mixed comments so far, one being:

    "I don't think I'd want to read that, I don't read these things very well. I have a sensative soul"

    and another being

    "Although an extremely hard situation to read about, I feel it is necessary to go on reading"

    Please check it out and see what you think, is it too much? I can't really lighten the story very well as it is not that type of story. I have only written on chapter so not too much to read... … ce-Summary

    1. WryLilt profile image92
      WryLiltposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Some parts of the story and wording jarr and misplaced commas also misplace the flow.

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