How to improve first hubpage?

  1. marina v profile image52
    marina vposted 9 years ago

    I need suggestions as to how to make it attractive overall...

  2. LegendaryN8 profile image58
    LegendaryN8posted 9 years ago

    I think the subject matter is a good choice.  I'm a Tim Gunn fan myself... "make it work"!

    This is just my approach... and I have only been doing this for a few days, so what I may say may not work or fit well with you or what gurus might say, but give it a wear:

    Try breaking it up into sections... this means selecting more than one text content capsule.  They give you the option of putting a subtitle, which gets put into bold writing.  IMO this breaks up the reading content a bit so it's not like reading a novel.

    Also, snazzy subtitles are a way to keep the reader's eye moving where you want it to go.

    Hope this helps!


    1. Single Mama profile image70
      Single Mamaposted 9 years agoin reply to this i see how people split up their work, by adding multiple text