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review my first Hub

  1. Supaplex profile image61
    Supaplexposted 5 years ago
    1. Uninvited Writer profile image82
      Uninvited Writerposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Far too short. It should have an introduction that explains what you are writing about, it should have a conclusion. There are a lot of grammatical errors.

  2. Peanutritious profile image60
    Peanutritiousposted 5 years ago

    It doesn't draw you in, it's like reading a list that you've written in a rush. I would have an introduction explaining what the game is about and why you like it etc. You need a conclusion too to round it all off you could have perhaps added a poll asking readers to vote for the games they like. That could perhaps lead to a follow on hub.

  3. kschang profile image88
    kschangposted 5 years ago

    You need to read some game reviews and see what sort of things they cover, like playability / interface, historical accuracy, visuals, sounds, mod support, bugginess, subject matter, and personal lean.