New hubpages user, made my first hub, how did I do?

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    tyjurelleposted 4 years ago

    Just joined yesterday and created my first hub a couple  hours ago. How did I do for a beginner? Can someone check out my article and share what you think about it? I want to be better with my writing and make better hubs. … ade-Center
    BTW I know the last 3 paragraphs have to be edited, I'll make the necessary changes ASAP! But again any thoughts or suggestions would be helpful.

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    Parallelsposted 4 years ago

    Pretty good! I spotted some grammar errors throughout that could use some fixing, but overall you seem to have a good grasp on how everything works (good structure, using different modules). Keep it up.

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    tyjurelleposted 4 years ago

    Thank-you so much! I'm aware of the minor errors,  I'll fix them later on.