NoRR4Me, I agree - if you're going to have photos and ads in the right hand column, your paragraphs should be shorter than usual. Yours are still too long.
The Hub you were recommended has one bad piece of advice in it. Don't have an "intro photo"! The top right-hand corner is the prime position for an ad - either Adsense, eBay or whatever you're signed up for.
The thumbnail for your Hub will use the first photo - whether it's at the top of the Hub, halfway down or at the end. So move the photo down.
Would any of you suggest 'reporting' an obvious newbie who has obviously not read anything of the rules and protocols here, whose profile includes no bio and indicates having joined but 2 hours prior, and whose...