Constructive Criticism on My First Short Story Hub

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    Ben Blackwellposted 4 years ago

    I plan on generally writing non-fiction articles here, but I have decided to expand a bit and write short stories or even poems occasionally.  Here is my first short story on Hubpages - … -the-River

    I don't have much experience at all writing fiction.  I never did it in public school or college, so the lack of experience makes it seem less "natural" than writing what I usually write about.

    If you guys have any comments, let me know.


    Ben Blackwell

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      WryLiltposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      If you want traffic to it (other than writing for fun), check out Cardisa's hub on SEO for creative writing: … nd-Fiction