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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Crime Writer Profile of Peter Lovesey

  1. dreamaserve profile image69
    dreamaserveposted 2 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Crime Writer Profile of Peter Lovesey. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Millionaire Tips profile image89
      Millionaire Tipsposted 2 years ago in reply to this

      The suggestions I provided for your other hub also apply to this one. 

      http://hubpages.com/forum/topic/128331

      Instead of writing more of the same, I would recommend that you work on your first hub and create a good model to follow.

    2. lions44 profile image94
      lions44posted 2 years ago in reply to this

      I just read the article. It was informative but I would add some focus on a couple of his novels or essential character. Tell the bio through that device.  Why is so popular?  Use of prose, characterization, etc.  You touched on it but be more descriptive about what are the essential elements of his work that leave the reader wanting more.  Using contemporary critics is a good tool.  Good luck.

      1. dreamaserve profile image69
        dreamaserveposted 2 years ago in reply to this

        Thanks for feedback

  2. WriteAngled profile image92
    WriteAngledposted 2 years ago

    The photo you use in the hub is (a) without an indication that it is licensed for reuse and (b) pixelated.

    It is my understanding that these two factors alone will prevent your hub from being featured.

 
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