Feedback on my hubs.

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   Maryanne Lyposted 10 years ago

   Hi everyone) I am new here and I see that professional hubbers don't hesitate to give worthy advice to beginners) Please,can you check my two hubs and give me feedback on them. I really want to write quality articles.Thank you beforehand)

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      calculus-geometryposted 10 years agoin reply to this

      Rhinoplasty is misspelled throughout your article.

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         Maryanne Lyposted 10 years agoin reply to this

         Really?I haven't noticed that..I will check it out.Thanks for your feedback)

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            relacheposted 10 years agoin reply to this

            I understand from your profile that you are not located in the USA, but please note that correctly spelled English and grammar are something both HubPages moderators and the search engines look for in English language content, and that many non-US writers find that an extremely challenging part of creating content on his site.
            
            If you want your content to pass the quality assurance process (QAP) you need to learn to check all your spelling and grammar before you submit it for review and potential publication.

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               Maryanne Lyposted 10 years agoin reply to this

               Thanks for feedback!Yeah,I'm from Armenia..I understand it's almost impossible to write like a native speaker..the only way out is probably writing more hubs and reading as much quality articles as possible..but could you,please,point out specific mistakes I've made so that I can work on my mistakes?

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                  relacheposted 10 years agoin reply to this

                  Someone has already pointed out that you have misspelled the name of the actual procedure you underwent in every place it occurs in your Hub.  I didn't think you needed to have that pointed out again, and instead wanted to emphasize that you need to learn to be responsible for your own work quality.
                  
                  I strongly suggest you read the entire Learning Center section so you learn how all the tools here (including the spell-checker) work.

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                     Maryanne Lyposted 10 years agoin reply to this

                     Ok.I'll take into consideration what you have suggested.Thank you again for your attention and time)

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   psycheskinnerposted 10 years ago

   I Read "Positive Changes in My Life after Rhynoplasty" and I think you have the perfect tone for writing hubs of this type: direct, interesting, and mixing information with personal experience.
   
   My only suggestion would be to ensure you use pictures within the appropriate license and give credit in the correct format, and do not use pictures that have watermarks or signatures from other sites.

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   Maryanne Lyposted 10 years ago

   Yeah, you're right I should have used my personal photos..thank you for your time and advice..I really appreciate it)

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      Paul Maplesdenposted 10 years agoin reply to this

      Using photos from elsewhere that you are entitled to use is fine; here's a learning center article that covers it: http://hubpages.com/learningcenter/legal-image-use

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         Maryanne Lyposted 10 years agoin reply to this

         Ok,I will check it out for sure)Thank you for your attention)

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