Hello Experts: Please Judge this Hub

  1. birthdaywish profile image87
    birthdaywishposted 2 years ago

    Hello Experts of the Hubpages community. I know my skill as a writer is not that high. That is why I am seeking your help to be better. Please, judge my hub and give me your valuable suggestions.

    1st Birthday Wishes, Messages and Quotes

  2. Elsie Hagley profile image61
    Elsie Hagleyposted 2 years ago

    It's nice to have a large picture at the top of the hub, not a small one.
    All the quotes are written for the parents of the child, how many mothers give a one-year-old a card?
    Try writing some for the grandparents, other family members or friends giving a young child a card or present.
    Just some ideas I hope that will help you get it featured.