I'd like feedback on my Hub: Diet to lose weight - Aim to lose weight

  1. sunlight2 profile image47
    sunlight2posted 2 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Diet to lose weight - Aim to lose weight. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image99
      theraggededgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Apologies in advance; I'm going to be a bit harsh. Don't take it personally.

      Over-saturated topic. Badly written. Simplistic advice: "eat less".

      Double title? - Repeating words doesn't make it better.

      You write: "Theoretically, all diets restrictive and are useless.", so why create a hub on dieting strategies?

      You've used an image and cited your own website as the source, but it's not the actual source, is it? You must have permission to use it.

      "For lunch, a balanced diet is recommended. Just lunch usually has little time to reflect on meals. Eat potatoes with fried egg, rice with chicken or tuna salad with bread. A sweet dessert is perfectly acceptable, but you must reduce the carbohydrate part of the main meal."

      So bread, rice, potatoes and sugar are not carbohydrates?

      Your eating plans, which look taken from another website, are unreadable.

      This hub will not pass QAP. My advice is to work on your English language skills and pick topics that are not already covered perfectly well by professionals.