I'd like feedback on my Hub: Green Tea and Your Metabolism

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  1. ljsmarketing profile image68
    ljsmarketingposted 2 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Green Tea and Your Metabolism (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image97
      theraggededgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Your hub is not just focused on Green Tea. Get rid of the exercise and protein shakes sections - they are not relevant to the topic of green tea. Or change the title of the hub.

      Also that first comments capsule is unnecessary and makes the hub appear to be shorter than it is. Get rid of it and just keep the one at the end.

      Your writing is fun but it's a little 'ra! ra!'. Too many exclamation points!!! Hubs are supposed to emulate magazine articles so you might consider toning it down a little.

      Good luck.

      1. FatFreddysCat profile image96
        FatFreddysCatposted 2 years agoin reply to this

        You got all that from a six-sentence paragraph? Or are we looking at two different things? (scratches head)

        1. theraggededge profile image97
          theraggededgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

          There's more under the first comment capsule.

        2. psycheskinner profile image83
          psycheskinnerposted 2 years agoin reply to this

          Scroll down.

  2. FatFreddysCat profile image96
    FatFreddysCatposted 2 years ago

    This is not a "hub," it's a paragraph. HubPages expects longer pieces (approximately 1000-1100 words) on any given topic.

  3. psycheskinner profile image83
    psycheskinnerposted 2 years ago

    You have a lot of littlle technical errors, such as incorrect use of periods and commas.  I would suggest slowing down and going through it a second time to copyedit.

  4. FatFreddysCat profile image96
    FatFreddysCatposted 2 years ago

    Haha, Wow. I didn't even know you could do that with a comment capsule. When I hit that thing I just thought that was the end of the article!

    I guess the O.P. can ignore my previous comments then... (shrugs)

  5. ljsmarketing profile image68
    ljsmarketingposted 2 years ago

    Thanks Everyone. For your constructive criticism,kinda brutal! I have no idea what I am doing. I guess it will hopefully get better as I go hopefully.

    1. theraggededge profile image97
      theraggededgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Spend some time here: http://hubpages.com/learningcenter/contents It will save you much angst in the long run.

  6. Besarien profile image84
    Besarienposted 2 years ago

    Hi ijsmarketing! I left feedback on your page instead of here. Happy New Year all, Besarien

 
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