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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Forskolin Blend, A Natural Way To Lose Fat

  1. KimDatumanong profile image72
    KimDatumanongposted 23 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Forskolin Blend, A Natural Way To Lose Fat (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    i need this posted asap or i am screwed huhuhuhu

    1. theraggededge profile image100
      theraggededgeposted 23 months agoin reply to this

      Sorry, but it reads a bit like a spammy weightloss advert for diet pills. Not sure whether you would be able to get this through QAP as it is. Have a read through this:

      http://hubpages.com/learningcenter/restricted-topics

      You mispell the product frequently throughout the piece.

  2. KimDatumanong profile image72
    KimDatumanongposted 23 months ago

    thank you for your honest opinion
    i will check on this more

    this is my first time

  3. psycheskinner profile image83
    psycheskinnerposted 23 months ago

    To me the hub does not look much different from an advertisement.  I woukld suggest emphasising more your personal experiences with taking it, and showing that you did research into the safety.  Acknowledge that the effectivelness and safety are not proven.  Discuss how to choose a product given that many of them are dilute or otherwise poorly made.

 
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