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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Sudarshan_ Kriya

  1. Alpana thinks profile image69
    Alpana thinksposted 20 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Sudarshan_ Kriya (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    I don't think the content is plagiarized. I believe that it is a great topic to write upon as I had a superb  experience practicing it through so many years. Please provide me with feedback.
    Regards,
    Alpana

    1. Authenticz profile image60
      Authenticzposted 20 months ago in reply to this

      Alpana , Nice and good  read and a good start! wish you good luck with your upcoming great reads.

    2. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 20 months ago in reply to this

      Hi there,

      I'm afraid the previous hubber has not helped you at all.

      Your hub has many grammatical errors and it is too short. Also, why have you got an underline character in the title?

      It would be a good idea to spend some time browsing the Learning Center: http://hubpages.com/learningcenter/contents

      Hope that helps a little.

    3. lovetherain profile image58
      lovetherainposted 20 months ago in reply to this

      "I don't think the content is plagiarized"

      You don't know for sure? Did you write it? Then you should know.

    4. Oztinato profile image83
      Oztinatoposted 20 months ago in reply to this

      It's a great Hub but way too short! It needs more pictures, information and techniques etc.

  2. Marisa Wright profile image93
    Marisa Wrightposted 20 months ago

    I agree with raggededge.  It's far too short, there's white space where there shouldn't be, and there are grammatical errors.

 
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