I need an honest feedback to my first ever publish post. Thank you

  1. marylen34 profile image60
    marylen34posted 19 months ago

    Hi guys, can you please visit my first newly publish article, it is still in pending for approval, I just need feedback if there is anything I need to improve, thank you.

    Mary

  2. Jodah profile image87
    Jodahposted 19 months ago

    Mary, We can't see your post because it isn't approved yet, unless you can provide a link. Welcome to HubPages though.

    1. marylen34 profile image60
      marylen34posted 19 months ago in reply to this

      oh I didn't know that, sorry I am new here, thanks.

      http://hubpages.com/family/9-Reasons-Wh … ndependent

 
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