I need an honest feedback to my first ever publish post. Thank you

  1. marylen34 profile image59
    marylen34posted 2 years ago

    Hi guys, can you please visit my first newly publish article, it is still in pending for approval, I just need feedback if there is anything I need to improve, thank you.

    Mary

  2. Jodah profile image90
    Jodahposted 2 years ago

    Mary, We can't see your post because it isn't approved yet, unless you can provide a link. Welcome to HubPages though.

    1. marylen34 profile image59
      marylen34posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      oh I didn't know that, sorry I am new here, thanks.

      http://hubpages.com/family/9-Reasons-Wh … ndependent

 
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