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Another amatureur FF hack

  1. paradigmsearch profile image94
    paradigmsearchposted 22 months ago

    The lizard basked on the rock. The snake slithered below.

    They saw. Stillness ensued

    The lizard climbed off the rock. The snake coiled.

    More stillness…

    The battle was joined. Snake teeth parts flew everywhere. As did many segments of the lizard’s tail. The desert sands turned red as the battle continued. Stillness once again ruled.

    The snake and the lizard eyed each other as they lay there still breathing.

    A vulture landed. Two delicious meals he had.

    And thus continues another typical day in the life of american corporate office politics.

    [critter edited, mainly word deletions]

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      calculus-geometryposted 22 months agoin reply to this

      Not that it makes any difference to me,  but why do you post your flash fiction on the forums instead as hubs?  Though CW hubs don't earn much, forum posts earn nothing.

      Oh well, good story and Happy Presidents Day.

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        paradigmsearchposted 22 months agoin reply to this

        HubPages rejects my crap.

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          calculus-geometryposted 22 months agoin reply to this

          Really?  I've seen some awfully...awful CW that somehow manages to pass QAP.  Are you categorizing it as CW? That seems to be the key. And a nice purty image at the top. Here's a nice one from pixabay
          https://pixabay.com/static/uploads/photo/2015/12/04/09/35/puff-adder-1076325_960_720.jpg

          1. Jesse Drzal profile image100
            Jesse Drzalposted 22 months agoin reply to this

            Nice pic Calc!

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    paradigmsearchposted 22 months ago

    Jeez, this a piece of crap.  Still editing. Advice?

 
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