I'd like feedback on my Hub: A conversation about drug overuse and abuse

  1. MGWriter profile image84
    MGWriterposted 23 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub A conversation about drug overuse and abuse. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Kylyssa profile image97
      Kylyssaposted 23 months agoin reply to this

      The grammar in your hub needs quite a bit of polish for it to reach HubPages standards. Taking a refresher course or reading some English grammar tutorials would go a long way toward getting your English language skills up to a higher level. 

      You have a lot of interesting things to say, but the manner in which you've presented them is confusing. Try separating out individual points you wish to make and writing a text capsule for each point instead of mixing them all together.

      You will also wish to write in more depth and at greater length while including more concrete facts. Pieces under five hundred words aren't very popular with Google anymore. Pieces that don't present any new or unique information aren't popular with readers.