I'd like feedback on my Hub: Independence day

  1. Japneet Singh profile image60
    Japneet Singhposted 15 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Independence day (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. TIMETRAVELER2 profile image92
      TIMETRAVELER2posted 15 months ago in reply to this

      The quality of English you use in this hub is substandard.  The title is vague, and does not even indicate that you are writing about India.

      While the photos are nice, there are far too many of them for the amount of content you have written.

      The article is far too short, also.

      Go back, do some research, name the struggles people went through in the past to attain Independence and by all means, find a way to refine your use of English.

      1. Japneet Singh profile image60
        Japneet Singhposted 15 months ago in reply to this

        Thank you for your valuable feedback. I am working on another article this will republished and corrected after that and yes I will definitely keep in mind your suggestions while writing it again. Once again thank you for suggestions.

 
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