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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Build your empire

  1. Winifred Kal profile image60
    Winifred Kalposted 15 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Build your empire (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image97
      theraggededgeposted 15 months agoin reply to this

      Spend some time here:

      http://hubpages.com/learningcenter/contents

      Welcome to HubPages and good luck.

      1. Winifred Kal profile image60
        Winifred Kalposted 15 months agoin reply to this

        Thank you very much

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image96
    Rupert Taylorposted 15 months ago

    This piece has the feel of a motivational speech, but it lacks any real information.
    Your headline does not tell us what you are writing about and will attract zero hits from search engines.
    There are some grammar issues its instead of it's, etc. There are no images and the article is very short. HP likes us to get to 700 plus words.

    1. Winifred Kal profile image60
      Winifred Kalposted 15 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you very much. I am grateful.

  3. Chatty Chat profile image86
    Chatty Chatposted 15 months ago

    Empire for what? Business or Clash of Clans?

    Like what Rupert said, your article is too short and lacks information.  These articles won't cut it on HubPages.

    When you write hubs, you need to be very specific and informative. You're competing for traffic with thousands of other articles on the same topic.

    1. Winifred Kal profile image60
      Winifred Kalposted 15 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you so much

 
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