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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Top 10 Clothing Brands in India

  1. Sheena Malhi profile image38
    Sheena Malhiposted 14 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Top 10 Clothing Brands in India (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image100
      theraggededgeposted 14 months agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      I see 'Top 10 Clothing Brands in India, 4 times in the first few lines. You only need it once. It's the title of the piece, so no need to repeat it unless you can do so naturally within the text.

      The main problem is your use of English. There are many grammatical errors right through the hub. Perhaps you could ask a native English speaker to go through the text and make corrections for you?

      The actual content is thin. There's no unique information and the hub is too short.

      The single image is uninspiring and not credited.

      The link to topweblists is a spam link and doesn't relate to the topic.

      Hope that helps.

  2. Skian profile image52
    Skianposted 14 months ago

    Hey there, the only problem i see over here is the length of your hub. There are minor grammar issues that can be neglected but lack of information has made this hub losen it's grip.
    The reason your hub remains unpublished is due to it's quality, use some more photos, adding 200 more words to every brand and two to three images would qualify your hub.

    Greetings,
    All the best

    1. theraggededge profile image100
      theraggededgeposted 14 months agoin reply to this

      They are not 'minor grammar issues'. The writing needs extensive revision before it will be approved.

      1. Jay Young1 profile image60
        Jay Young1posted 14 months agoin reply to this

        I must agree with you theraggededge . Please Sheena Malhi, only trying to help.

  3. lobobrandon profile image90
    lobobrandonposted 14 months ago

    Completely wrong usage of language - every sentence needs working on.

    No useful information provided

    The last link is spam

    The picture is irrelevant and doesn't look good anyway. You have a Peter England pic, but the brand in question isn't on your top 10 list.

 
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