I'd like feedback on my Hub: Top 10 Clothing Brands in India

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   Sheena Malhiposted 18 months ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Top 10 Clothing Brands in India (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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      theraggededgeposted 18 months agoin reply to this

      Hi there,
      
      I see 'Top 10 Clothing Brands in India, 4 times in the first few lines. You only need it once. It's the title of the piece, so no need to repeat it unless you can do so naturally within the text.
      
      The main problem is your use of English. There are many grammatical errors right through the hub. Perhaps you could ask a native English speaker to go through the text and make corrections for you?
      
      The actual content is thin. There's no unique information and the hub is too short.
      
      The single image is uninspiring and not credited.
      
      The link to topweblists is a spam link and doesn't relate to the topic.
      
      Hope that helps.

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   Skianposted 18 months ago

   Hey there, the only problem i see over here is the length of your hub. There are minor grammar issues that can be neglected but lack of information has made this hub losen it's grip.
   The reason your hub remains unpublished is due to it's quality, use some more photos, adding 200 more words to every brand and two to three images would qualify your hub.
   
   Greetings,
   All the best

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      theraggededgeposted 18 months agoin reply to this

      They are not 'minor grammar issues'. The writing needs extensive revision before it will be approved.

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         Jay Young1posted 18 months agoin reply to this

         I must agree with you theraggededge . Please Sheena Malhi, only trying to help.

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   lobobrandonposted 18 months ago

   Completely wrong usage of language - every sentence needs working on.
   
   No useful information provided
   
   The last link is spam
   
   The picture is irrelevant and doesn't look good anyway. You have a Peter England pic, but the brand in question isn't on your top 10 list.

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