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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Beauty and women are two things that always come to

  1. Tony Pascal profile image61
    Tony Pascalposted 3 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Beauty and women are two things that always come together (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. greenmind profile image96
      greenmindposted 3 months agoin reply to this

      Oh my goodness.

  2. FatFreddysCat profile image99
    FatFreddysCatposted 3 months ago

    OK, I hate to be "that guy" but here we go....

    The English is awkward at best, from the title on down.

    Example: "However, here it would like to discuss some useful Beauty tips (Women) with good hope"

    Plus, you appear to be a dude, if your profile pic is accurate.
    Therefore I wonder how much authority you hold in the field of "women's hygiene."

    1. theraggededge profile image100
      theraggededgeposted 3 months agoin reply to this

      I have to confess, I typed out some comments and then thought they were so negative, I deleted the post. I really couldn't find anything positive to say. Sorry sad

  3. CMHypno profile image96
    CMHypnoposted 3 months ago

    Have you thought that the topic you are writing on might be part of the problem?

    Health and beauty have always been very popular subjects on HubPages, and I suspect you would now need to write a superlative hub on this topic to get it featured.  Your hub is very generic and it has no new angle or information to make it stand out.

    Coupled with the poor English, unfortunately you will probably struggle.  There are lots of tips and bits of information - why not try picking one, doing more research and writing a more specialised hub?

    Also look at your title.  It doesn't really say what the hub is about and isn't too search-engine friendly.

    And, as speaking as a woman, maybe knock out some of the sweeping statements and generalisations.  Not all women are obsessed with their looks!

  4. HollieT profile image87
    HollieTposted 3 months ago

    Tbh, I did some serious eye rolling and my eyebrows were raised more than once. I found the advice about cleaning inside crusts rather intriguing though, and the bit about rigid mascara and all women having their own metabolic rate.

    1. CMHypno profile image96
      CMHypnoposted 3 months agoin reply to this

      Curbing pimples was also an interesting one I've never tried before

      1. HollieT profile image87
        HollieTposted 3 months agoin reply to this

        *Must include in my beauty regimen,

  5. Stephanie Purser profile image86
    Stephanie Purserposted 3 months ago

    Hi Tony,
    I had a quick look at your profile. Perhaps writing a bio that explains why you are knowledgeable on the subject might encourage more trust in your audience.
    Also I find your title alone a bit offensive. Sorry women are not 'things'. Try using key words in your title that are 'search engine friendly'.

    1. Tony Pascal profile image61
      Tony Pascalposted 3 months agoin reply to this

      I will take care about the Word "Things" that you highlighted.
      Believe me, i had no such type of intention.

  6. Stephanie Purser profile image86
    Stephanie Purserposted 3 months ago

    That will help

 
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