I'd like feedback on my Hub: I, Refugee: Crestfallen

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  1. Rodric29 profile image80
    Rodric29posted 22 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub I, Refugee: Crestfallen. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image99
      theraggededgeposted 22 months agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      It's a blog post, not an article. HP is steering away from personal accounts and towards more informative writing.

      The title of any online piece of writing, at least one that wants to attract traffic, should be 'searchable'. In other words, people should be searching for those keywords. Your title is not one that would be searched and not in the context of LDS - refugees have a more current meaning, right now.

      Images must be legal to use. I would certainly question that Disney one.

      My thoughts are that it might get approved if you sort the images out, however, it won't garner much traffic at HP.

      Hope that helps.

      1. Rodric29 profile image80
        Rodric29posted 22 months agoin reply to this

        Thanks for your feedback

  2. Marisa Wright profile image96
    Marisa Wrightposted 22 months ago

    As RaggedEdge says, it's not suitable material for a Hub.

    Hubs need to be the sort of articles you'd read in a magazine.  As you know, magazines do often publish personal stories - but they're not written just as a personal memoir, they're written to share an experience that others can learn and profit from.   That's not the case with your story.

    1. Rodric29 profile image80
      Rodric29posted 22 months agoin reply to this

      Thanks for your feedback. I did put more personal elements in this article. I suppose I should not run series of articles? The purpose of the article is to who that we can outcast ourselves from society by our own thoughts and actions. I used my personal story to show this by describing all the negative feelings and concerns I experience while ironically on a family trip to a Church Conference meant to inspire and uplift. Should I remove it from hubpages?

      1. theraggededge profile image99
        theraggededgeposted 22 months agoin reply to this

        If you can't get it approved and featured on HP, it might do better on a blog where you can expand on it, write more about it and you can have it be as personal as you like. I think that's what I would do.

        1. Rodric29 profile image80
          Rodric29posted 22 months agoin reply to this

          Thanks. I hate to have to do it, but I will.

 
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