I need feedback on my hub: Feeling Depressed? These few tips can help!

  1. Chinesta M profile image60
    Chinesta Mposted 9 months ago

    I want to know what I'm doing wriong, it hasn't been featured as of yet and i've made tons of changes. Also, does anyone know how to keep a hub published so it doesn't keep unpublishing after every time it's been sent for being featured? Here's the link http://hubpages.com/health/Be-Mentally-Healthy

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    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 9 months ago in reply to this

      Some of the feedback I gave you already still applies.

      'Opposing' is wrong. It should be 'other'.

      Grammar issues still need fixing... for example, "So head out, have a walk, sit for a few and feel the air feel your breathe and close your eyes and you will have a good time."

      'Sit for a few' what? Minutes, hours, days?
      'Feel the air feel your breathe'? Doesn't make sense. How about 'Close your eyes and breathe in the fresh air.'
      'Have a good time' - doesn't sound right. Try ... 'and your mood will improve'.

      Grammarly is your friend.

      Also you can't take images from the web and republish them. It's illegal and you could get landed with a bill to pay - a large one. You can use images from sites like Pixabay - they are free and no attribution is required.  https://hubpageshelp.com/media/Learning … -image-use

      Hope that helps.

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