I'd like feedback on my Hub: Is it possible to be a diabetic patient in the futu

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    Rahma mohammedposted 13 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Is it possible to be a diabetic patient in the future? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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    Rupert Taylorposted 13 months ago

    Rahma. There are several issues with your Hub, the most obvious one is the poor English grammar.

    Your headline is too long and doesn't make a lot of sense. Headlines should always be written in Title Case. You ask a question and readers will expect an answer, but your first sentence says you won't answer the question.

    Grammar:
    "I will not answer the question in a special manner, Because I don't know the future, but I will refute you the more common risk factors that could make you a diabetic patient .what we must know first is…what is diabetes ?"

    Because should not start with a capital letter.

    Refute means to prove a statement to be wrong; it is incorrectly used in this context.

    There should not be a space in front of a period but after it. A new sentence after a period starts with a capital letter. Similarly, there should not be a space in front of a question mark.

 
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