I'd like feedback on my Hub: Indian Handicraft Types – Metal-Stone-Wood Wares

  1. Deepika ojha profile image82
    Deepika ojhaposted 5 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Indian Handicraft Types – Metal-Stone-Wood Wares (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Jason mackenzie profile image88
      Jason mackenzieposted 5 months agoin reply to this

      Hi, you need to improve your English in terms of grammar and your style of writing. There are numerous changes that I could point out but would suggest getting a professional editor to go through your article and make improvements and then see if it makes a difference. Thanks, regards...

 
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