I'd like feedback on my Hub: Indian Handicraft Types – Metal-Stone-Wood Wares

  1. Deepika ojha profile image60
    Deepika ojhaposted 11 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Indian Handicraft Types – Metal-Stone-Wood Wares (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Jason mackenzie profile image46
      Jason mackenzieposted 11 months agoin reply to this

      Hi, you need to improve your English in terms of grammar and your style of writing. There are numerous changes that I could point out but would suggest getting a professional editor to go through your article and make improvements and then see if it makes a difference. Thanks, regards...

 
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