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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Indian Handicraft Types – Metal-Stone-Wood Wares

  1. Deepika ojha profile image81
    Deepika ojhaposted 4 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Indian Handicraft Types – Metal-Stone-Wood Wares. What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    I am new hubber. I don't understand why my hub is not getting featured. Can anyone help me.

    1. Jeremy Gill profile image86
      Jeremy Gillposted 2 months ago in reply to this

      Your Hub is sufficiently long and formatted well, so my few ideas are listed below:
      1) Reword awkwardly worded sentences. Here are examples: "Different items of brass which are available in Indian markets are kitchens items, god deities, decorative items, jewelry and much more."
      A good revision would be "Different items of brass  available in Indian markets include...

      "This metal is also majorly manufactured in Madhya Pradesh, India."
      "Handicraft is a creation by hands connected to religions"
      "Stone handicraft products in India are carved from centuries."

      2) Use the active voice. A great many of your sentences are in passive voice, which is less exciting. Example of active: He fights tonight.
      Example of passive: He is fighting tonight.

      Best of luck.

      1. Deepika ojha profile image81
        Deepika ojhaposted 2 months ago in reply to this

        Thanks for your advice. I will work on that.

  2. pen promulgates profile image80
    pen promulgatesposted 2 months ago

    Quite detailed. Good job.
    The images you have used, are they legal to use? Do they have creative common license (cco)? If the images are downloaded from Google, HP won't allow if they are not with proper permissions.
    Websites like pixabay or pexels have images that can he used freely.

    1. Deepika ojha profile image81
      Deepika ojhaposted 2 months ago in reply to this

      yes, all my images are available for commercial use

  3. pen promulgates profile image80
    pen promulgatesposted 2 months ago

    Cite the sources then and mention you have the permission.

    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 2 months ago in reply to this

      Pen, just to clarify, they are not cco images. They are Creative Commons licensed. People get confused smile

  4. pen promulgates profile image80
    pen promulgatesposted 2 months ago

    @ theraggededge, thanks. Shall keep that in mind.

 
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