Please review my hub and give me more suggestions .
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M sorry !
I did not get the point actually I was confused , yes I have published hub http://hub.me/ala8k
Please check it out and give me valuable feedback
Sorry, but you have too many English mistakes plus you're making an unsubstantiated medical claim:
"All types of physical or mental illness, deceases (diseases) can be cured by daily Yoga. Even doctors accept this fact."
No medical doctor worthy of the title would ever make such a claim. If you substitute "helped" for "cured" then it would be fine, and most doctors would probably agree with that to some extent.
And watch for spelling mistakes like diseases/ deceases.There's plenty of evidence that diseased individuals can benefit from yoga. Results for deceased individuals, however, are very disappointing. They refuse to partake in any yoga exercises, and refuse to say why or even say anything at all.
In your list of five scientific reasons, numbers 2 & 5 are the same. It looks like Yoga doesn't help with short-term memory loss.
Hi, too many grammatical mistakes. For example, this sentence - In Hinduism, According to our ancient scriptures that is Puranas, the shankh was originated during the Churning of ocean (Samudramanthan) by the Deities and Shri Vishnu held it in the form of weapon.
I would write is as - As per ancient Hindu scriptures namely the Puranas, shankh originated during the churning of ocean (Samudramanthan) by deities and Shri Vishnu held it in form of a weapon.
There are numerous such mistakes in almost every sentence, so I suggest you get your article edited and proofread by a professional and then post it here. Thanks, regards...
Thank you so much mam/sir for giving me a golden feedback with the help of it , I could improve my skills and writing style.
As soon as possible, I will re-correct my hub .
thanks again, I wish I could get same feedback in future from your side.
Try using a plug-in like Grammarly. It doesn't detect everything, and cannot improve your style, but it does highlight the obvious grammar errors.
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