I'd like feedback on my Hub: 10 Simple Ways to Improve Your Design Portfolio

  1. Rodgers panato profile image61
    Rodgers panatoposted 4 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub 10 Simple Ways to Improve Your Design Portfolio (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image97
    Rupert Taylorposted 4 months ago

    Your profile says you are "a highly experienced article writer with a strong command of the English language." Sorry, but that's not obvious from what you have written as there are numerous errors in your article.

    First sentence
    "As a designer, you will want to always to (?) remain on top of things."

    "... first impression to potential customers and employees (employers?) before they get to (eliminate get to) interact with you.

    There are many examples such as these throughout the piece. I suggest reading the article aloud and funning it through a program such as Grammarly.

    Subheads should be in Title Face.

    And, an article about a subject such as design would benefit greatly with the addition of visual aids. Be careful about this and ensure that images are free of copyright restrictions.

    You need to spend some time at the Learning Center here https://hubpageshelp.com/

 
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