I'd like feedback on my Hub: Learning English Language in an easy way & its bene

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   nahidbd1971posted 7 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Learning English Language in an easy way & its benefits (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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      theraggededgeposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      The main problem with this is that you need to have an advanced level of English in order to read it

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         nahidbd1971posted 7 years agoin reply to this

         Thank you for your comment. I'm looking forward to improving my writing.

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      TIMETRAVELER2posted 7 years agoin reply to this

      If you are going to write an article about learning a language, you should know enough to use it properly yourself.
      
      I see numerous errors that, as a reader wanting to learn more, would be a total turn off.
      
      It's a great topic,but is not one that should be written by anybody who is
      
      not a native speaker of English or
      does not have perfect knowledge of the language
      
      The truth is that English is one of the most difficult languages in the world to learn and there is no"easy" way to learn it. Therefore, the entire premise of your article is false.
      
      You would do better to write about something you really know about.

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   theraggededgeposted 7 years ago

   Okay, I've had time to look at the hub properly.
   
   First of all, get rid of "Language! What is a language?" I think most of us are aware what a language is. Especially those intent on learning a new one. Never treat your readers like idiots
   
   Right through your introduction you are stating the obvious. There's no need for it. We know if we can speak several languages we can communicate with others.
   
   However, your bulleted list is very good. Just change the intro to be more in keeping with your readers' level of intelligence.
   
   There are many grammatical errors, such as "English is one of the most highly speaking seven languages."
   
   English doesn't speak. You mean "English is one of the seven most spoken languages."
   
   When writing about language, you have to make sure that your grammar, spelling and phrasing is perfect, otherwise the article (and the writer) loses all credibility. So I suggest you get someone to proofread it thoroughly.
   
   And well done you for knowing three languages - I'm jealous!

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      nahidbd1971posted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks again for your crucial suggestions. I'll work on those areas.

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   pen promulgatesposted 7 years ago

   I guess changing the introduction to a more compelling level should help.
   Congrats for the knowledge of three languages.
   I am curious to know what are those languages?

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      nahidbd1971posted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you for your comment. The languages are Bengali, English & Hindi. And currently learning Spanish & Arabic.

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   pen promulgatesposted 7 years ago

   I am sure you will succeed.

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