I'd like feedback on my article: The political downfall of Greece

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   asifjamalmarwatposted 5 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: The political downfall of Greece (must be signed in to view)

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      AliciaCposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Asif, I'm sorry to say this, but there are many English errors in your article. The English in the second callout is correct, but the text there is copied from another site. We aren't allowed to copy text.
      
      It would be a good idea to take an English course to improve your knowledge of the language. You could try writing at HubPages after you have finished the course. Another solution would be to find someone with an excellent knowledge of English who is willing to correct the errors in your article.
      
      You should state the source and license of all the images in the article to show that they are suitable for use on HubPages. The title and subtitles should be written in APA style title case

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      OldRosesposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      HubPages is an American site and expects authors who want to publish here to speak excellent English or are native speakers of English.  You need to improve your English language skills or you will never be published here.

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      alambientertainmentposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Hello Asif. You can try to check your article for grammar or spelling errors using this free tool: https://www.online-spellcheck.com.

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   asifjamalmarwatposted 5 years ago

   but how can i improve i have tried to many times but the hub didn't pass my article please i need your help

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      AliciaCposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      I have told you how to improve, Asif. You have two choices.
      
      1) At the moment, your knowledge of English is not good enough for you to publish articles on HubPages. You need to forget about publishing on this website for now and take one or more English courses. In the future, when your knowledge of English has improved, you could try writing articles for HubPages again.
      
      2) You could look for someone who is an expert in English and who is willing to edit your article. You may have to pay them for this service. It's possible that a writer at HubPages will help you edit your article. I doubt whether anyone has the time, however, because the writers here have to create their own articles. We can help people with a few errors in their article, but not someone with many mistakes.
      
      Good luck, whatever you decide to do.

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   Anita Haschposted 5 years ago

   Hi Asif,
   To really appreciate your article you need to get somebody to edit it. Try 'Fiver.com,'
   I received a letter translated from German to English and it was completely garbled.
   I am sure that if you have your articles edited before publishing them on Hubpages they should pass.
   Good luck

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      CYong74posted 5 years agoin reply to this

      I really don't think it's a good idea for him to pay a freelancer on Fiverr to edit his article. Reason being, he doesn't have the English skills to double-check. He could easily be ripped off.

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   Margaret Panposted 5 years ago

   Asif, you should definitely proofread your article or have someone else do it for you. However, if you don't have good grammar/spelling/writing skills I don't see the reason for you to continue writing on Hubpages since your articles most probably won't get published. If you love writing, you should firstly improve your knowledge of English language and afterwards I'm sure you will be able to write some great articles.

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