I'd like feedback on my Hub: Hyperthermic Syndromes: All That Is Hot Is Not Feve

  1. docashp profile image51
    docashpposted 5 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Hyperthermic Syndromes: All That Is Hot Is Not Fever.. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image100
      theraggededgeposted 5 months agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      Who are you writing this hub for? Is your typical reader a student? A doctor? A parent? Decide who your readership is and write an introduction to the hub aimed at them.

      There is *always* a space after a comma and a period/full stop.

      Definition not defination. Use a spell-checker.

      If you are limiting the scope of the article to heat-stroke, then heat-stroke should be in the title.

      "How Does The Body Lose Heat" not 'loose'. Put your sub-titles into title case as I just did.

      Put all the text in those call-out modules into a text capsule. A call-out should be used very infrequently, not consecutively. No more than three, I'd say, throughout the article.

      Hope that helps.

  2. docashp profile image51
    docashpposted 5 months ago

    Thanks a lot for your help.

 
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