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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Best Juicer for Wheatgrass and Leafy Greens of All

  1. mjkamrul profile image40
    mjkamrulposted 4 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Best Juicer for Wheatgrass and Leafy Greens of All Time. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image99
      theraggededgeposted 4 months agoin reply to this

      The comments and points I made on your other hub apply to this one as well.

      Sorry. It won't get through like this, and you will probably find your other similar hubs will be unfeatured eventually.

  2. pen promulgates profile image42
    pen promulgatesposted 4 months ago

    Hi Mjkamrul,

    The article has a lot of grammar issues. Especially agreement of the verb with the subject. Have you not proofread the article before submitting?

    Some errors for example:

    In the first paragraph,
    1) You wrote the problem start, it should be the problem starts
    2) Will las longer when it should be last longer

    In the miracle exclusive paragraph
    1) You wrote 'this machine extract' it should be this machine extracts.
    2) Then you wrote 'Non-toxic stainless steel keep the juicer free of bacteria and help juicing items,' again the correct form of verbs is keeps and helps (agreement of the verb with the subject).
    3) You wrote as compare when it should be as compared.

    Like these, there are many errors. I recommend use the app Grammarly to fix such issues.

    Your article is very very promotional.
    You have Amazon page for every mixer you recommend.

    Hope these help.

    1. mjkamrul profile image40
      mjkamrulposted 4 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you so much for your kind advice, 'll really have a look on them and fix...

 
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