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  1. Rosa Ann Crowder profile image76
    Rosa Ann Crowderposted 8 weeks ago
    1. Sherry Hewins profile image95
      Sherry Hewinsposted 8 weeks ago in reply to this

      If you are saying that Donald Trump is the answer, I totally disagree with you, but that is neither here nor there. There are some grammar, word usage, and punctuation issues. In the poll, near the top, you say "Except it but hope for the best." I think what you really meant was, "Accept it but hope for the best."

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image94
    Rupert Taylorposted 8 weeks ago

    Images need to be credited and legal to use.

    Question marks in your opening list should not be there. These are not questions, they are statements.

    There are punctuation and grammar issues

    "No matter what state we’re from or who we praise; (should be a comma not a semi-colon) in reality, we are at this time separated because of greed, different religious beliefs, political opinions or pure laziness that in it (?doesn't make sense) should be the reason that the words “common sense” comes (should be come) into play."

    Try running your text through software such as Hemingway or Grammarly to catch these errors.

    Most writers put their poll questions at the end of their articles after readers have absorbed the information.

    1. Rosa Ann Crowder profile image76
      Rosa Ann Crowderposted 8 weeks ago in reply to this

      I do use Grammarly. Thanks for your help.

 
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