My Article on Puberty

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    Phuc Truongposted 3 months ago

    I would like help on my article about puberty. What is spammy about my article? I am new to this and I'm using my phone to write articles. I would like it if you would tell me EVERYTHING that is wrong with my article. I know that I could've categorize my article on puberty a lot better but besides that, why is it spammy?

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image100
    Rupert Taylorposted 3 months ago

    Several issues.

    Grammar, spelling etc.

    "Puberty is a time in a boys (boy's) or girls (girl's) life, where (when) they change physically and mentally. Its (it's) a time in our lives where (when) we start becoming mature. Puberty affects all of us differently, epecially (especially) between genders."

    That's six errors in your first two sentences. I didn't go any further because I did not expect things to improve. This is not good enough for HP.

    Large blocks of type are a turn off for readers.

    Images must be free of copyright restrictions and credited as to source.

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      Phuc Truongposted 3 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you very much, I will improve it and credit my sources.

 
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