Looking for suggestions to improve my article

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   Arpan Gposted 3 years ago

   Here's the article link:
   https://discover.hubpages.com/travel/Th … ntry-Nepal
   
   Really looking forward to hear suggestions from anyone to improve the quality of the article so that it can pass Quality Assessment

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      AliciaCposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Hi, Arpan. You need to look at the email that HubPages sent you about the article and follow the instructions in it. The link that you’ve shared gives a 404 error. The email tells you how to create a link to your article that works.

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         Arpan Gposted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Please click on this link https://discover.hubpages.com/travel/Th … ntry-Nepal

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      CYong74posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      What AliciaC said.
      
      Also, looking at your bio, I suggest you clean up punctuation errors while waiting for feedback. There should not be spaces before commas and full stops.

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         Arpan Gposted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Please check my content https://discover.hubpages.com/travel/Th … ntry-Nepal

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            theraggededgeposted 3 years agoin reply to this

            Have you visited those places? Travel articles work best when the writer describes their own experience. You should add some personal anecdotes and impressions. As it stands, the article reads as though you have simply taken facts from elsewhere.

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      theraggededgeposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Hi there,
      
      You just joined yesterday. Have you spent time researching what HubPages requires?
      
      If you came to HubPages because you saw a video on YouTube, know that the guy is lying - you cannot make money here using his methods. Everything he says is wrong.
      
      You need to read everything in the Learning Center and FAQs (Help, top right). You should also read articles on the network sites to get to know what makes the grade.
      
      Your articles should be at least 1,000 words, completely original, correctly formatted and have legal images which are properly sourced and cited.
      
      Also keep in mind that HubPages is an American site with a global, English-speaking audience.
      
      Good luck and welcome.

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         Arpan Gposted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Hi! What's the maximum number of words I can write here? Could you please check my content that's published here and undergoing for review?
         https://discover.hubpages.com/travel/Th … ntry-Nepal

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            OldRosesposted 3 years agoin reply to this

            Are you even bothering to read the answers that people are giving you?  You need to read EVERYTHING in the Learning Center and the FAQs BEFORE you write anything here.  Everything that you need to know is in the Learning Center and the FAQs.  That is our best advice.  If you want to succeed here, that is what you need to do.
            
            I see in your bio that you are a blogger.  HubPages is not a blogging platform.  If you want to write a blog, I suggest you take a look at Blogger or WordPress.  Both are free and both can be monetized.

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            theraggededgeposted 3 years agoin reply to this

            Did you actually read my comment?

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   Miebakagh57posted 3 years ago

   As writers, we should re-read our articles. Errors are later detect in the process of reading throughly. That helps to eliminate many mistakes and makes the right correction. So, I agree with the others. Good success to you.

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   Urwa786posted 3 years ago

   Hi Arpan
   Should your article not be Featured, you can boost its quality (and odds of being Featured) by:
   Making sure that your title is short and descriptive
   Presenting information that cannot be found elsewhere online
   Presenting concrete facts, figures, and data
   Providing a pleasant reading experience via attractive, easy-to-skip around formatting
   Utilizing a wide variety of capsules
   Making an effort to include many superb images
   Editing your text (or having someone else edit it)
   Avoiding spammy elements

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